Tuesday 28 May 2019

3 comments:

  1. Hi Jake. It's Simeon here from T2.
    Thanks for sharing what your favourite thing was on camp. I really liked mountain biking on camp too. I think it is great that you have included a photo on your post.
    Next time think about how you could make your post more eye catching and appealing to your audience.
    Have you been to Hanmer before? You can check out my blog here:
    https://gmssimeon7046.blogspot.com/
    Bye for now,
    Simeon

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  2. Hi Jake. It was great seeing you enjoying yourself on camp. You were really at home tearing around in the bush, mountain biking, seeing the possum in the wood heap and climbing trees . The only thing I saw you not enjoy was the lolly shop !
    Keep blogging cannot wait to see your next BLOG Maybe how to cook venison sausages
    Mr B

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  3. Hi Jake. You probably don't know me but my name is Riki. I'm from Kaingaroa School in the far north. I bet you liked the hanmer camp because if I were there I would of enjoyed it a lot too. I think you could of added more detail on the recount.

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