This is my work about Ivan. He is a big gorilla, an ape from Africa. Ivan smashed the corner of his enclosure with a cricket bat he got for a present. I loved this activity because it is about animals.
Hi Jake my name is Brooklyn and I'm from Ohaeawai Primary School. I like how you described Ivan the biggest ape. You are right it does have arm and leg muscles. It is very fluffy. Blog you later.
Hi Jake I really like your blog post. Next Time You could make a screencastify of your work. Did you copy your work of the internet or did you actually do it Also You could post more From Kristian
Kia Ora Jake Mackenzie here from Totara 3 I really like the description on what the gorilla did and what he used to smash the window.Also I like how you have described what Ivan looks like. Isn't it crazy how powerful gorillas are and and how tall they are. Keep up the good work I look forward to looking at it further on Bye from Mackenzie
Kia Ora Jake Wow man you guys have been busy in M2 Keep it up. I really like the way you have presented "The One And Only Ivan" Its really eye catching and informative. I also like how you have explained why you have done this activity
Hi Jake my name is Mitchel from Ohaeawai Primary School. I really like that you describe the fur on Ivan. Blog you later.
ReplyDeleteHi Jake my name is Brooklyn and I'm from Ohaeawai Primary School. I like how you described Ivan the biggest ape. You are right it does have arm and leg muscles. It is very fluffy. Blog you later.
ReplyDeleteHi Jake callum here I really like your DLO for you book the one and only Ivan next time you could put more detail.
ReplyDeleteHi Jake I really like your blog post. Next Time You could make a screencastify of your work.
ReplyDeleteDid you copy your work of the internet or did you actually do it Also You could post more
From Kristian
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ReplyDeleteHey Jake I really like your dlo but next time you need to put in more information. but keep up the good work. from kaine
ReplyDeleteHi Jake It's Levi here from totara I really like your DLO for your booknext time could you pls put more detail next time
ReplyDeletehi Jake i like the DLO for your book next time you make more detail and other things.
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Kia Ora Jake Mackenzie here from Totara 3
ReplyDeleteI really like the description on what the gorilla did and what he used to smash the window.Also I like how you have described what Ivan looks like.
Isn't it crazy how powerful gorillas are and and how tall they are.
Keep up the good work I look forward to looking at it further on
Bye from Mackenzie
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Wow man you guys have been busy in M2 Keep it up. I
really like the way you have presented "The One And Only Ivan" Its really eye catching and informative. I also like how you have explained why you have done this activity
Matthew
Thanks Matthew I worked really hard on this and I was proud of it. I am trying really hard with my reading and writing.
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