Tuesday, 5 June 2018

the one and only ivan

WALT: Use description to describe a character

This is my work about Ivan.  He is a big gorilla, an ape from Africa.  Ivan smashed the corner of his enclosure with a cricket bat he got for a present.  I loved this activity because it is about animals.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Jake my name is Mitchel from Ohaeawai Primary School. I really like that you describe the fur on Ivan. Blog you later.

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  2. Hi Jake my name is Brooklyn and I'm from Ohaeawai Primary School. I like how you described Ivan the biggest ape. You are right it does have arm and leg muscles. It is very fluffy. Blog you later.

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