Kia Ora Jake. Your favourite cousin, Reagan, here!!!!!
I really like how you have presented this post and added in photos to make it colourful and effective. I love the metaphor 'I am a python because I wrap my mum in squeezy hugs'!!!!! Next time you might want to separate the words in the top paragraph as I can't really understand what it says. Other than that, I really like this posts and would love to see you posting more often. This reminds of Term 1 when we had to create metaphrs for ourselves for the Get NZ Writing programme!
kia Ora Jake Mackenzie here from Totara 3 Man there metaphors are really cool. I like how you have added in the photos of what you are talking about. Maybe next time you could add a some description on what metaphors are and why you had to do it. Do you like doing metaphors because I do. Mackenzie Clark
Kia Ora Jake. Your favourite cousin, Reagan, here!!!!!
ReplyDeleteI really like how you have presented this post and added in photos to make it colourful and effective.
I love the metaphor 'I am a python because I wrap my mum in squeezy hugs'!!!!!
Next time you might want to separate the words in the top paragraph as I can't really understand what it says.
Other than that, I really like this posts and would love to see you posting more often.
This reminds of Term 1 when we had to create metaphrs for ourselves for the Get NZ Writing programme!
Noho ora mai
Reagan
kia Ora Jake Mackenzie here from Totara 3
ReplyDeleteMan there metaphors are really cool.
I like how you have added in the photos of what you are talking about.
Maybe next time you could add a some description on what metaphors are and why you had to do it.
Do you like doing metaphors because I do.
Mackenzie Clark
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