Thursday, 23 April 2020

My Special Place


For this week we had to Create a senses poem about are special place i chose plantation island because i love it there.

4 comments:

  1. Hi Jake

    Oh to be at your special place right now!!
    Sun, sand, palm trees... maybe a hammock and a good book. bliss.

    Your writing certainly got me dreaming. Enjoyed reading it.

    Tineka

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  2. Kia ora Jake, Your poem helped me to imagine a place I have never been-although heard about! How lucky you are to have that special place to return to one day in the future. I like clear, bold font used and the lovely photos.

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  3. Hello Jake,
    Hi my name is Sione and I attend St Pius x catholic school.I really like your writing about Plantation.Keep up the good work.

    Best Wishes.

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  4. Hi Jake,

    I am Lucy from yaldhurst model school. I am a year 6. I think this a fantastic blog post. I like the discription. Maybe next time you can tell us why you like it.

    Overall Great Blog Post

    Kind Regards

    From Lucy

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments.