Great poem! I really like how you have talked about what it would have felt like for Neil to be walking on the moon! A three-day trip to the moon would certainly be interesting. :)
One way that you can make your writing even more awesome is to include pictures so that us readers can see what you are writing about :) Just make sure to link where you get your pictures from.
Did you know that on the moon you would weigh just 16% of what you weigh now? So that means if you weighed 100kg on earth you would weight just 16kg on the moon! Would you like to go to the moon one day?
It’s Beren from the Summer Learning Journey team. You started off really well with your blogging, but I haven’t seen a post from you in a while. It would be so cool to see you try a few more activities! Remember, you don’t have to do the activities in order, have a look and see which ones interest you:
Hi again Jake,
ReplyDeleteGreat poem! I really like how you have talked about what it would have felt like for Neil to be walking on the moon! A three-day trip to the moon would certainly be interesting. :)
One way that you can make your writing even more awesome is to include pictures so that us readers can see what you are writing about :) Just make sure to link where you get your pictures from.
Did you know that on the moon you would weigh just 16% of what you weigh now? So that means if you weighed 100kg on earth you would weight just 16kg on the moon! Would you like to go to the moon one day?
Keep up the great work!
Gabe
Hello Jake,
ReplyDeleteIt’s Beren from the Summer Learning Journey team. You started off really well with your blogging, but I haven’t seen a post from you in a while. It would be so cool to see you try a few more activities! Remember, you don’t have to do the activities in order, have a look and see which ones interest you:
https://sites.google.com/site/summerlearningjourney/weekly-activities
I hope to see some posts from you soon!
Beren
:)